The Hungry Mouse
A sneaky intruder gets the cheese.14 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The mouse is enjoying the cheese while the cat is away. Mice are frightening but this poem kind of puts the cuteness to the test. Good luck in the contest.
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The mouse is enjoying the cheese while the cat is away. Mice are frightening but this poem kind of puts the cuteness to the test. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
Comment from Neonewman
I love this little writing prompt and have enjoyed reading the others. So far, I find this one my favorite. Great artwork you have paired as well. Thank you for sharing, and best of luck in the contest.
God bless,
Steve
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I love this little writing prompt and have enjoyed reading the others. So far, I find this one my favorite. Great artwork you have paired as well. Thank you for sharing, and best of luck in the contest.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
Comment from Navada
Sounds like something any of us would do! I liked the story of your cheeky, hungry little mouse and the visual image is so full of personality. Good luck for the contest!
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Sounds like something any of us would do! I liked the story of your cheeky, hungry little mouse and the visual image is so full of personality. Good luck for the contest!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
Comment from leather
Oh, good....something light hearted is needed for these dark times. I smile at seeing that comical grey mouse carting off his booty. The quatrain is well-crafted and meets the requirements of the contest.
Best wishes.
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Oh, good....something light hearted is needed for these dark times. I smile at seeing that comical grey mouse carting off his booty. The quatrain is well-crafted and meets the requirements of the contest.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
Comment from zanya
Who wouldn't love that cheeky mouse, so entertainingly portrayed here with his mousy, mischievous ways - a veritable delightful pic to illustrate -thanks for sharing
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Who wouldn't love that cheeky mouse, so entertainingly portrayed here with his mousy, mischievous ways - a veritable delightful pic to illustrate -thanks for sharing
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
Comment from Wendyanne
I am really loving these funny mouse poems and this is no exception!! Poor skinny mouse deserves a bit of cheese doesn't he? This is well written with a rhyme within a rhyme on line 3. Good luck
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I am really loving these funny mouse poems and this is no exception!! Poor skinny mouse deserves a bit of cheese doesn't he? This is well written with a rhyme within a rhyme on line 3. Good luck
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
Comment from Wendy G
You have written a fun poem with good rhyme appropriate to the requirements. The flow also is good. Your little mouse is quite engaging. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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You have written a fun poem with good rhyme appropriate to the requirements. The flow also is good. Your little mouse is quite engaging. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile here as this mouse knows what he likes and cheese brings a smile to his face, a fun post for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x x
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You made me smile here as this mouse knows what he likes and cheese brings a smile to his face, a fun post for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
Comment from JPGeo
This is a really great entry for Mischievous Mouse. The rhymes are nice and I really like the internal rhyme in the "unrhymed" line. Good job matching the smiling mouse drawing and good luck!
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This is a really great entry for Mischievous Mouse. The rhymes are nice and I really like the internal rhyme in the "unrhymed" line. Good job matching the smiling mouse drawing and good luck!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
Comment from Mark D. R.
a really fun verse you penned
the cartoon image is a perfect match for your contest entry
nice rhyming images!
one can easily imagine your mouse's satisfactory and cheesy grin
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a really fun verse you penned
the cartoon image is a perfect match for your contest entry
nice rhyming images!
one can easily imagine your mouse's satisfactory and cheesy grin
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
