Winter Gems
a nature haiku6 total reviews
Comment from Wendyanne
This is a lovely well written piece of poetry in haiku style. The imagery is delightful, ie, icicles looking like gems shining in the sun. I enjoyed this very much. Good luck and welcome to this site.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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This is a lovely well written piece of poetry in haiku style. The imagery is delightful, ie, icicles looking like gems shining in the sun. I enjoyed this very much. Good luck and welcome to this site.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from jim vecchio
You certainly created a lovely image with your words, just as God creates these wonders for our eyes. Congratulations on your First Milestone! Keep them coming!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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You certainly created a lovely image with your words, just as God creates these wonders for our eyes. Congratulations on your First Milestone! Keep them coming!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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This excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from royowen
To me the dawning of a new day signifies the end of the things we can bury, and treat the past as a teacher and the present to an opportunity to create a better today, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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To me the dawning of a new day signifies the end of the things we can bury, and treat the past as a teacher and the present to an opportunity to create a better today, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much!
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Well done
Comment from Kristen Rose Ulrich
This is a very pretty haiku. I wonder what made you think of that. I like the beautiful imagery and words you used. This is very good entry. Good luck in the contest! Best wishes!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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This is a very pretty haiku. I wonder what made you think of that. I like the beautiful imagery and words you used. This is very good entry. Good luck in the contest! Best wishes!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much!
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You?re welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine Haiku as your brought a magical scene to my eyes here and I wish you luck with the contest and welcome to Fanstory. The dew can look so sparkly in the winter sun, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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A fine Haiku as your brought a magical scene to my eyes here and I wish you luck with the contest and welcome to Fanstory. The dew can look so sparkly in the winter sun, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much!
