Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Congrats on your contest win and very well deserved! This is a powerfully moving nanni verse on the horrors of war and the children trapped in fear inside it. Thanks for sharing. Debbie

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023

Thank you so much for the great review and congrats, Debbie. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this heartbreaking piece. Have yourself a wonderful day and thank you again.

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Ron

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is excellent work for the challenge. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. Thank you for sharing this.

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thank you for the fantastic review, Alex. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this sad piece.

Comment from Kaiku

Exceptional

Excellent. The graphic and words are certainly profound. Great effort for the contest. I am sure there will be a number of fine entries especially with all that is suffering in today's news.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thank you for the great review and big sixer, Kaiku. Yes, there is way too much suffering going on all over the place all the time anymore. I really appreciate the stop in and the generous rating, my friend. Have yourself a great weekend and thank you again.

reply by Kaiku on 17-Nov-2023

Absolutely