Comment from Claire Tennant

Excellent

It is beautifully expressed, and I think most of us can relate to these words. Some days more than others. I only wish there was more but then you created it.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023

Thank you for the fantastic review, Claire. Yes, we often wonder what else we could have done but too old to try some of it now. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a great day and thank you again.

=]

Ron

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Not everyone has the chance to fulfil their dreams, only the lucky ones.

For the sake of grammar you need to remove (have) here:
(we wonder where those years (have) went).

Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023

Thank you for the great review and catching the goof, Dolly. I changed it but it seems, to me, to hold less punch now. Lol. But yes, it needs to be correct. I really appreciate the generous stars and help. Have yourself a fantastic day or night.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Very interesting. I guess many have gone through this phase in their lives. It usually happens when one realizes they have more years behind them than they do before them. Sometimes the dreams of youth are just that... dreams.

This is a strong entry.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023

Thank you for the great review, Lance. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece.