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The integration of human consciousness and the digital realm
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Comment from
lancellot
The theme of human and AI integration is classic one. I'm reminded on Battle Star Galactica: Colbalt, and The Lawnmower Man for starters.
Here the story is brief, and all narrative. It tells us everything but doesn't show or involve us. There is no conflict, no journey, no growth of character we experience.
I think structurally, the writing is fine, but more story elements and plot needs to be done.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
Comment from
Alexandra Trovato
This is very creative! Excellent work for the challenge. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that readers will enjoy, as I did. Thank you for sharing this!
Best wishes.
Alex
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
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