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Silent Code , Silent ..

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4 total reviews 
Comment from angel123
Excellent
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I enjoyed reading your poem and your strong statement against violence to women. Thank you sharing the video. Your poem flows well and your artwork choice enhances your message. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023

Comment from 1Dreamer
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Thank you for such an important message! I especially liked the way you had the video to support what was written. Very well put together and educational as well.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2023

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
    Glad you appreciated the video I provided. People need to understand how important this secret code is, it can save lives.


    I was surprised that the police was not aware of its meaning.

    Thank you for rating my poem with a six star review ( not sure so in case you gave it your vote in the booth , thanks again)

    Keep safe!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent
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Excellent entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt contest.

I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.

Good syllables count and connection between lines.

I appreciate your writing talent. Well done!

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2023

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
    The more people know of this secret code ,the more lives can be saved.

    Thank you for taking the time to review.

Comment from Mario PIERRE
Excellent
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*** UPDATED - I VOTED JUST NOW!!!
Very current and concerning issue which grapples most societies today. Your poem captures the essence of it: This has to stop!!!
Bravo!! The graphic is very visual and striking too.
I found the second line has only 4 syllables... maybe you could review it?
Thanks

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2023

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    What is important is that we all know the code .. ( wink)

    Thanks for the helpful feedback

    Initially I had :

    SOS
    For women, victims
    Of violence

    But then I noticed before posting that violence was three syllables.
    It was early in the morning (3.00)

    You are right I will edit now

    Thank you!