Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Beautifully done! I love this and the way those words are so fitting for the visual! I can read the absolute disdain and disapproval in her face. This is a great entry and a winner in my view! Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023

Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Debbie. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this little piece.

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Ha Ha, good one! I'm not sure either, but you have definitely given this one the ole college try. I do think it's possible to use 10 words and create something beautiful. Good luck.

Kiwi

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023

Thank you for the great review, Kiwi. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness.

Comment from Janis M.

Excellent

I think it can if done right. However it is a huge complaint of mine that just because you slap words on a page, doesn't make it poetry. It can be prose, and while the definition of what actually makes poetry is fairly loose, most things are just one liner punch lines to a joke.

But this is both humerous and actually is poetry. So points and kudos.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023

Thank you for the fantastic review, Janis. Yes, they let a lot of stuff fly as poetry on here but I'll have to admit, I do add my share of one liners on here as well. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Have yourself a great day and thank you again.

reply by Janis M. on 30-Nov-2023

At least you are honest! I can toast to that. Best of luck!

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Hahaha I ask myself that every time I see a poetry contest for poems with so many words or so many syllables as I am a 'traditionalist' and like old fashioned poetry lol. Great minds think alike lol. Good luck.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023

Lol. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Wendy. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I have often wondered what makes poetry qualify as real poetry. I think "warrent" should be "warrant," but I could be wrong. I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023

Thank you for the great review and for catching the goof, Jessi. I fixed it. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you this silly piece.