She'll Stand Strong
Nature 5-7-5 contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Excellent, dramatic visual, reflected in your powerfully expressed 5-7-5 verse! Love the way the words flow, capturing the whispered essence of Nature's fight and determination against mankind. A strong contender! Good luck Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Excellent, dramatic visual, reflected in your powerfully expressed 5-7-5 verse! Love the way the words flow, capturing the whispered essence of Nature's fight and determination against mankind. A strong contender! Good luck Debbie
Comment Written 02-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Thank you for the great review, Debbie . I'm sure in the end she'll be victorious. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Michael Groover
The phrase "whispers softly 'neath her breath" immediately sets a tone of intimacy and determination. It suggests a moment of self-reassurance or a quiet declaration of strength, possibly in the face of adversity or danger.
The choice to whisper these words softly underlines their personal significance. It could indicate a moment of self-reflection or an internal assertion of courage. The quietness of the whisper contrasts with the power of the words themselves, creating a compelling dynamic.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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The phrase "whispers softly 'neath her breath" immediately sets a tone of intimacy and determination. It suggests a moment of self-reassurance or a quiet declaration of strength, possibly in the face of adversity or danger.
The choice to whisper these words softly underlines their personal significance. It could indicate a moment of self-reflection or an internal assertion of courage. The quietness of the whisper contrasts with the power of the words themselves, creating a compelling dynamic.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Thank you for the outstanding review, Michael. Few people on here take the time. I really appreciate it, my friend. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a great rest your weekend.
Comment from patcelaw
Call mother, nature, or call it design by God our planet will stand strong, even with the corruption that men have done to it. The only way our earth will be dissolved. Is that God himself well dissolve it one day. Patricia.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Call mother, nature, or call it design by God our planet will stand strong, even with the corruption that men have done to it. The only way our earth will be dissolved. Is that God himself well dissolve it one day. Patricia.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Yes it will. You're correct, only when God decides. Thank you for the great review and gracious stars, Patricia.
Comment from Daylily
This entry makes a very strong statement about the need for preservation after the ruination of many land areas by human beings. I cringe whenever I think about the Amazon jungle region and so many new animals on the extinction list. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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This entry makes a very strong statement about the need for preservation after the ruination of many land areas by human beings. I cringe whenever I think about the Amazon jungle region and so many new animals on the extinction list. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Thank you for the great review, Daylily. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this short piece.
