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An Unexpected Proposal

A Christmas dream come true

5 total reviews 
Comment from JSD
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A great entry for the Christmas Story competition. Well done and I hope this does well. Such a sweet tale, like a fairy tale really. The stuff of our dreams really. Most enjoyable. x

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2023


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Comment from Yusita
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Overall, this was a great write and an enjoyable story. My heart was breaking for Sarah at the beginning, but I loved the ending and was happy to see how things took a turn for the better for her. There's nothing like having someone who is one's "home". I'm so thankful for mine. This was a sweet story that made me sigh!

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2023


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Comment from Brenda Strauser
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I thought the story was very good. The beginning was a little sad but got better towards the end. It was a very nice love story. I liked all the detail you put in the story. Great job!

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2023


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Comment from Navada
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There is something really enticing about the opportunity to get away to a secluded location with someone you love and just screen out the rest of the world for a while. Thanks for the share.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2023


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Comment from Austin Yu
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This is such a sweet romance story, just in time for Christmas. It was sad at first, seeing Sarah deal with so much, including anxiety and depression since she was young. However, I felt better towards the end, when she fell in love with Richard. It was such a nice turn of the tables when he decided to propose to her. I loved it, such a sweet ending.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2023


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