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Pen is Mightier part II

Part II

2 total reviews 
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a very well written story. I enjoyed listening to it very much, and it kept me engaged the whole way through. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you a very merry Christmas and a most happy and prosperous new year. Patricia.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2023

Comment from Lea Tonin1
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Who I liked that last line? That was really cool, especially given the nature of your story. So many secrets that ancient ones too. Very creative writing and quite enjoyed it a lot and it was fun to read. I see no issues with grammar orosetics. I think it's a good submission and I hope you have a fabulous night!

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2023