Comment from Kaiku

Excellent

Do you have this wonderful movement hidden within your framework and then with a bit of an Italian twist? Fluidity certainly is a word that justifies. It was quite a hypnotic video.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Ciao!

In my head I imagine doing all those beautiful movements but the truth is I have no sense of rhythm and I?m stiff as a board.

That?s another trait I didn?t inherit from my mother who was an excellent dancer (Indian and flamenco) .

Glad you took the time to enjoy the video!

Keep safe! 🍀

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 4-8-4, Spellbound, has the proper formatting and focuses on the dancer who can gather all of the audience's passions and deliver them to a dream. Nice.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023

Glad you enjoyed the topic, I gather you watched the video below.

Her every movement was spot-on with the music.

I loved her bordeaux costume, it spread out beautifully when she did those swirls.

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

This is an excellent well written piece of poetry in 4-8-4 format. You have described the litheness and sensuality of an exotic dancer very vividly and I must admit their dancing is quite hypnotic to watch. Good luck.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023

Glad you took the time to watch the video I provided ..she danced perfectly in sync with the music...lots of hard work behind such a beautiful performance.

Thank you for reviewing my wee poem!