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Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Profeta Fallido"An Encanto fan fic, cause why not.
3 total reviews
Comment from Austin Yu
The dialogue was very thorough, and I liked the unique point of view and perspectives that your story brought.. Congratulations on this post, and good luck!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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The dialogue was very thorough, and I liked the unique point of view and perspectives that your story brought.. Congratulations on this post, and good luck!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Thanks, I appreciate your thoughts!
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written, and it kept my attention the whole way through. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I do also wish you a very merry Christmas and a prosperous and happy new year. Patricia.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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This is very well written, and it kept my attention the whole way through. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I do also wish you a very merry Christmas and a prosperous and happy new year. Patricia.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Why thank you so much for the kind words. It is appreciated.
Comment from T.A. Walk
Hey great job again!
Your dialog is clean and real. The paragraphs were laid out nicely as well.
No SPAG critique, you did a good job with everything!
Keep up the good work, I look forward to seeing more!
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Hey great job again!
Your dialog is clean and real. The paragraphs were laid out nicely as well.
No SPAG critique, you did a good job with everything!
Keep up the good work, I look forward to seeing more!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Why thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
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You?re very welcome!
Told you I liked it :)
