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Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Profeta Fallido"
An Encanto fan fic, cause why not.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Austin Yu
Good
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The dialogue was very thorough, and I liked the unique point of view and perspectives that your story brought.. Congratulations on this post, and good luck!

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
    Thanks, I appreciate your thoughts!
Comment from patcelaw
Excellent
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This is very well written, and it kept my attention the whole way through. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I do also wish you a very merry Christmas and a prosperous and happy new year. Patricia.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
    Why thank you so much for the kind words. It is appreciated.
Comment from T.A. Walk
Excellent
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Hey great job again!

Your dialog is clean and real. The paragraphs were laid out nicely as well.

No SPAG critique, you did a good job with everything!

Keep up the good work, I look forward to seeing more!

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
    Why thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
reply by T.A. Walk on 13-Dec-2023
    You?re very welcome!

    Told you I liked it :)