So Fine
The most wonderful woman of all time.7 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This may be true for you, but I find my fine wife as satisfying as a glass of champagne, though I don;t drink. Still, I always say she is the BEST wife in the world FOR ME. You seemingly feel alike.
  |
This may be true for you, but I find my fine wife as satisfying as a glass of champagne, though I don;t drink. Still, I always say she is the BEST wife in the world FOR ME. You seemingly feel alike.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This poem expresses how a man reacts to a woman he loves or cares about. Right now, I can't relate to this poem, but it's wonderful written by someone who respects women.
|
This poem expresses how a man reacts to a woman he loves or cares about. Right now, I can't relate to this poem, but it's wonderful written by someone who respects women.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
Comment from Wendyanne
These seem like lyrics and I think they would make a great song with the right music. I particularly like these lines,
"If Rembrandt saw, he'd paint her
Mozart, An Opus or Two
Shakespeare's Sonnets would bear her name,"
Very nice. Good luck.
|
These seem like lyrics and I think they would make a great song with the right music. I particularly like these lines,
"If Rembrandt saw, he'd paint her
Mozart, An Opus or Two
Shakespeare's Sonnets would bear her name,"
Very nice. Good luck.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2023
Comment from JSD
An intriguing and interesting piece. I like the refrain and the repetition. They work well and your love sings from this most effectively. Just in your third line do you mean, 'exquisite'?
|
An intriguing and interesting piece. I like the refrain and the repetition. They work well and your love sings from this most effectively. Just in your third line do you mean, 'exquisite'?
Comment Written 13-Dec-2023
Comment from Douglas Goff
Okay, this should be a song. Even has the chorus. That is some strong love you found!
Good job and good luck in the Love contest. I think this was great!
D
|
Okay, this should be a song. Even has the chorus. That is some strong love you found!
Good job and good luck in the Love contest. I think this was great!
D
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
Comment from Wy Jung
A beautiful love poem/lyrics. The world needs more love and poems describing that love. This is a touching ode to a Fine woman! Your heart shines through the words. I see no changes that I'd make except perhaps a bigger font and a spacer or two between the stanzas/verses simply for aesthetics. But even as is, it works perfectly
|
A beautiful love poem/lyrics. The world needs more love and poems describing that love. This is a touching ode to a Fine woman! Your heart shines through the words. I see no changes that I'd make except perhaps a bigger font and a spacer or two between the stanzas/verses simply for aesthetics. But even as is, it works perfectly
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
Comment from patcelaw
This poem is so fine, so fine so fine I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I was just having a little fun with you with this review. Having a very merry Christmas and a happy new year. Pat
|
This poem is so fine, so fine so fine I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I was just having a little fun with you with this review. Having a very merry Christmas and a happy new year. Pat
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
