Winter wonderland
Shimmering blanket of white covers the earth14 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
Joanne,
Congrats on your 2nd place win in the 1-6-1 poem contest. Your poem captures in a few words the wonder and magic of snow fall in the winter season.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
Joanne,
Congrats on your 2nd place win in the 1-6-1 poem contest. Your poem captures in a few words the wonder and magic of snow fall in the winter season.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 16-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much Eugene appreciate it
Comment from zanya
Yes it's a short format but an effective one and oh so seasonal and the beauty of winter snow and a great pic to illustrate - winter has its own unique beauty
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
Yes it's a short format but an effective one and oh so seasonal and the beauty of winter snow and a great pic to illustrate - winter has its own unique beauty
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from Andrea Kepple
I love the picture you chose to pair with your poem. It really highlights the feeling generated by the poem.
I like the word choices to make each line rhyme.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
I love the picture you chose to pair with your poem. It really highlights the feeling generated by the poem.
I like the word choices to make each line rhyme.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thanks so much
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, Winter Wonderland, has the proper formatting and brings the readers into what can be appreciated both by those viewing in a remote sunny lane or the deep frigid plane. Nice.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
This 1-6-1, Winter Wonderland, has the proper formatting and brings the readers into what can be appreciated both by those viewing in a remote sunny lane or the deep frigid plane. Nice.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thanks so much
Comment from Navada
I like the beautiful visual imagery and the way you've crafted a response that both rhymes and matches the required syllable structure, Good luck for the contest! :)
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
I like the beautiful visual imagery and the way you've crafted a response that both rhymes and matches the required syllable structure, Good luck for the contest! :)
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you for the great review
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Some of us desire no snow, as it'll make the winter shorter. This poem is nicely written, and the image is very attractive. There is always something about a blanket of snow, it does make it cleaner.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
Some of us desire no snow, as it'll make the winter shorter. This poem is nicely written, and the image is very attractive. There is always something about a blanket of snow, it does make it cleaner.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from angel123
I love your artwork choice. I think its wonderful you took the picture while driving along the highway, and decided to write a poem about it. Well written! Nature does inspire us. Your poem flows and rhymes well with just a few words. Your message is very meaningful. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
I love your artwork choice. I think its wonderful you took the picture while driving along the highway, and decided to write a poem about it. Well written! Nature does inspire us. Your poem flows and rhymes well with just a few words. Your message is very meaningful. Best wishes!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Thank you
Comment from jaded831
A winter wonderland, breathtaking scenery. You met all the criteria and painted a picture with words. Your poem is at the top of my list, but I must finish reading them all. Have a great holiday season.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
A winter wonderland, breathtaking scenery. You met all the criteria and painted a picture with words. Your poem is at the top of my list, but I must finish reading them all. Have a great holiday season.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from patcelaw
This is so beautifully done. I wish you the very best in the contest. Have a great day. May you have a wonderful Christmas with lots of gifts and may you also have a very happy and prosperous new year
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
This is so beautifully done. I wish you the very best in the contest. Have a great day. May you have a wonderful Christmas with lots of gifts and may you also have a very happy and prosperous new year
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much merry Christmas to you as well
Comment from Wendyanne
Snow is just such a beautiful sight to behold especially when it is pure white and unsullied. You have described it well with just a few well chosen words, "winter crystalline show." Wonderful. Good luck.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
Snow is just such a beautiful sight to behold especially when it is pure white and unsullied. You have described it well with just a few well chosen words, "winter crystalline show." Wonderful. Good luck.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Thanks so much