Comment from TPAC

Excellent

An imaginative thought in my given opinion, finding the ingredients for this stir appealing to my interests: holding one probable suggestion. The hateful dragon breathes fiery war drones. This concept given in my viewpoint, prevailing this read.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023

Thanks for the read and suggestion. I will consider it.

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Harry,

The contest rules noted "no pictures allowed."

Although, your artwork is a spectacular complement to your contest entry. Sadly, the story being told is actually happening in the Ukraine and Israel.

I would insert a long dash after "... fiery drones" setting off your concluding phrase (add a period after your last word?).

Your chosen yellow text is OK, but it would be more war-like if it was red IMHO.

Mark

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023

Thanks for the catch and the suggestions. I have edited.

Comment from Janis M.

Excellent

Great poem! It's very vividly descriptive and conveys destruction and terror. Just as a reminder though, no pictures for this contest! Honestly, you don't need one. The words were very well chosen.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023

Yes, thanks re pictures. I have deleted it.

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Ooh very good!!! I love the metaphor of a hateful war dragon breathing fire on countries. Such a vividly descriptive image. Excellent alliteration in this well written poem too. Very well done.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023

Thanks for the read and positive feedback.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This stark presentation, War Dragon, can also be a metaphor for the powerful and destructive nature of war that is forced unto a generation seeking its opposite.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023

Thanks for the read and positive feedback.