Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

You've done a great job with the prompt. The fire of his love has melted the ice queen. Now she no longer exists as she was, but has become a new creature.
Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023

Thanks for the review and good luck wish.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. That's a funny way to describe in one line about a relationship. But if the "Ice Queen" expired - is she dead or is the icy-ness just gone and she's won over by his heat? Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023

No longer feeling icy, but warmed by love.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Wow, my friend, you nailed this one in super short verse poetry. I wish I had the time to enter this contest, but you're the clear winner in my eyes. I'll vote for you. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the upcoming contest. Sally. XO

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023

Thank you, Sally. I appreciate your vote of confidence.

Comment from Janis M.

Excellent

I like the juxtaposition between the ice queen and the heat of desires, perhaps unwanted passion from someone else. Great choice to show the comparison.

Btw, just as a reminder, but no pictures allowed for this contest. Just let your words do themselves justice.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023

Thanks for the review and for letting me know that pictures aren't allowed. I have removed it.