Gently
5-7-5 poem for the contest12 total reviews
Comment from royowen
A nicely worded 5/7/5 June, emotions are better described as being warmed, not so much by passion, orvcbeong chiseled, or being shaped and sharpened by circumstance but by spontaneity well done, blessings Roy
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A nicely worded 5/7/5 June, emotions are better described as being warmed, not so much by passion, orvcbeong chiseled, or being shaped and sharpened by circumstance but by spontaneity well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
Comment from JSD
Clever metaphor and some beautiful imagery, both in the artwork - which is amazing - and in the little haiku. You encapsulate a lovely idea in your seventeen syllables. Good luck with this.
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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Clever metaphor and some beautiful imagery, both in the artwork - which is amazing - and in the little haiku. You encapsulate a lovely idea in your seventeen syllables. Good luck with this.
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Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Thank you for sharing your insights. Wasn?t sure if the metaphor worked. Your feedback is much appreciated!
