Holy Star
a CinQuain7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This cinquain, Holy Star, has the proper formatting and makes remarks to significantly recognize the presence of this long-foretold star that has finally come.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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This cinquain, Holy Star, has the proper formatting and makes remarks to significantly recognize the presence of this long-foretold star that has finally come.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, Bill. Much appreciated.
Melissa
Comment from jaded831
Your poem touched my heart. My wish this year is Christmas day will bring change. The world and our country will start negotiations for peace, and we all start working together to combat climate change.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Your poem touched my heart. My wish this year is Christmas day will bring change. The world and our country will start negotiations for peace, and we all start working together to combat climate change.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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I so agree! Thank you for your wise words!
Melissa
Comment from Yusita
I'm not very familiar with the CinQuain style, but this is a great one--that much I know! I love how you said "its twinkling song". Lovely imagery and imagination. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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I'm not very familiar with the CinQuain style, but this is a great one--that much I know! I love how you said "its twinkling song". Lovely imagery and imagination. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written poem you have penned about the Holy Star. You used very beautiful words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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This is a very beautiful and very well written poem you have penned about the Holy Star. You used very beautiful words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 22-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, Teri!
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You are so welcome!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet, you now have 5 votes.
It's Christmas time and so Jesus' birth is a common topic now . It's not easy to tell the event in a way to win a vote.
Your shot at it earned my vote. I love the rhyme makes your delightful poem sound like a sweet childrens poem.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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Ciao poet, you now have 5 votes.
It's Christmas time and so Jesus' birth is a common topic now . It's not easy to tell the event in a way to win a vote.
Your shot at it earned my vote. I love the rhyme makes your delightful poem sound like a sweet childrens poem.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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Hello my sweet, Italian friend. Thank you for your wonderful review!!
Comment from JSD
Great picture and lovely cinquain that rhymes too. You've arranged the syllables perfectly and reminded us all of what Christmas is about. Well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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Great picture and lovely cinquain that rhymes too. You've arranged the syllables perfectly and reminded us all of what Christmas is about. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nice entry for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest. I also want to wish you a very merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous new year.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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This is a very nice entry for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest. I also want to wish you a very merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous new year.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much!
