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Jesus Came to Save All

God loves us all equally .... songs below

7 total reviews 
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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This is so true. Jesus and God created us equally. Sure, I wish we could and would remember this, but our lives are treated unequally because of the opinions of other people and their lives.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
    When I posted my wee poem, I had no idea my words would be felt so strongly.

    Merry Christmas

    and

    Let's hope the New Year brings peace.

    A warm Thank You!

    Keep safe!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This cinquain, Jesus Came to Save All, has the proper formatting and reminds all that we are the earth and we are what God wants to have survive. ................................

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
    God must be weeping now, seeing how his children are at each others' throats, killing, and destroying the home planet he gifted us.

    in the meantime, Satan is enjoying the "show".

Comment from jaded831
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Yours is by far the best. Your poem reflects my own heart. If everyone would realize we are all the same on the inside, and not put barriers up. Perhaps we would have a peaceful world. Happy Holidays.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
    I never thought my wee poem would receive 7 votes and one six-star review.

    I?m glad my words meant so much to you.

    I hope you enjoyed the songs I provided in the notes section.

Comment from Wendy G
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You are exactly right. There is diversity in all of creation. We are the only ones who cause friction and division based on skin colour. A fine entry. Best wishes.
Wendy

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
    And often creed too. Religion is the cause of too many wars.

    Thank you for reading and sharing your view.

    Keep safe!
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very beautiful and very well written and so true poem. You used very good descriptive words and very nice songs. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
    Thank you so much.

    I?m glad you took the time to listen to the songs I provided.

Comment from Sugarray77
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Great job on this inspirational and reflective piece. The sentiments are so appropriate this time of year and mean so much. I enjoyed reading it!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
    Glad you enjoyed my wee poem , I hope you listened to the songs I provided.

    Keep safe!
Comment from JSD
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A great response to the prompt. You've mastered the syllables and given us an important message for Christmas time. I especially like the contraction at the end, division friction. Well done and good luck with this.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
    Thank you for the kind response . It s sad that race and creed cause of so much darkness between members of our species.

    We choose destruction.