The Cold
What could possibly stop the perfect plan?3 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Slader was caught because, at a moment when he was supposed to be stealthy, he began to sneeze. This is very cute. Perfect flash presentation. Good luck with it at the polls. I'm betting it will do very well. xo
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Slader was caught because, at a moment when he was supposed to be stealthy, he began to sneeze. This is very cute. Perfect flash presentation. Good luck with it at the polls. I'm betting it will do very well. xo
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
Comment from Janis M.
Slader got caught with a sneeze. Poor slader. By the way that is an excellent name for a criminal character. Slader sent to the slammer! Lol. Good luck in the contest.
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Slader got caught with a sneeze. Poor slader. By the way that is an excellent name for a criminal character. Slader sent to the slammer! Lol. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
Comment from Navada
Can I assume that he sneezed at an inappropriate moment and was therefore discovered and caught in the act? :) Nice work of flash fiction and I wholeheartedly agree that the reader should be respected to do some of the work - thank you!!
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Can I assume that he sneezed at an inappropriate moment and was therefore discovered and caught in the act? :) Nice work of flash fiction and I wholeheartedly agree that the reader should be respected to do some of the work - thank you!!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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The cops were walking away from the bush he was hiding behind when he sneezed. You were absolutely correct. Thank you for your kind review and generous rating.
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You're most welcome! :)
