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Comment from royowen
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I'm not sure what the NCA is, we have an NCA here where I live, people were killed, otherwise it was a little cryptic, but looks like a comment of folk walking on the dark side, beautifully written blessings Roy

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
    The NCA is the National Crime Agency this piece concerns a dedicated crime of drug smuggling to whom the perpetrator is a local ... true story !
reply by royowen on 28-Dec-2023
    I think it means something similar here, an anti crime official was murdered
Comment from Douglas Goff
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That was an interestingly unexpected turn. I really thought this was about a turkey. Ha!

I guess Christmas dinner is for everyone. Good read.
D

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
    So long as its not snowing lol.
Comment from jmdg1954
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Sort of strange to me because I had. I blueberries is about other then drugs.
I could not penalize lower stars for my inability.

Cheers to a good day...
John

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
    Many thanks my dear stout don't try to penalize when you don't understand also normally useful to read some of the reviews if your ever unsure they can help.
Comment from Julie Helms
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OK, so this sent me on a wild goose chase (turkey chase). I googled and gaggled...
Everything seemed to behind a pay wall or was a podcast this was the best I could come up with...

ground.news/article/our-documentary-investigates-north-sea-diver-behind-100m-highland-cocaine-plot

Did I get it right?
I greatly enjoyed your newsy poem and the mystery that needed to be solved. Very creative. Thanks!

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
    Its about our local new bee who just got himself arrested in the Caribbean ! Try Hebridean News website should still be on there.
Comment from Mia Twysted
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I am not much for snow as I have been in my share of blizzards. This piece was a little unclear to me but as I reread it I felt a feeling of coming home. As the snows falls each eac it is coming back to the earth so it may melt and start again.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
    He certainly did come home with a whopping sentence if the stories are to be believed.