Opposites
Poem : Using Love Hate Clean and filthy3 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a really good poem you have penned using the words needed from the writing prompt. You used great imagery to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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This is a really good poem you have penned using the words needed from the writing prompt. You used great imagery to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Thank you for your kind review and for your time Teri! - Bless
Comment from Janis M.
A very cheeky poem, short and sweet, and to the point. I love referring to the dictionary when people use a word with an incorrect meaning, "Oh really, what does the dictionary say?" (Only when it is particularly important of course).
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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A very cheeky poem, short and sweet, and to the point. I love referring to the dictionary when people use a word with an incorrect meaning, "Oh really, what does the dictionary say?" (Only when it is particularly important of course).
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Thank you for your kind review and for your time Janis - Bless
Comment from Navada
I like the way you've highlighted dualities in this piece. Two things you need to fix, though - plural words like "minds" don't need an apostrophe, and when you said "anthesis" in your poem and in the author's note, did you mean "antithesis"? All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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I like the way you've highlighted dualities in this piece. Two things you need to fix, though - plural words like "minds" don't need an apostrophe, and when you said "anthesis" in your poem and in the author's note, did you mean "antithesis"? All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Thank you for your excellent review Nevada, your comments are very much appreciated!!! - Bless
