Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hello Paul. I popped over to your page to look at your version of the ABC form and think you did an excellent job with this form. The theme of faith is always dear to my heart and I enjoyed reading it. Well done.

Melissa

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024

Thanks, Melissa. I'll keep trying to broaden my horizons.

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

This ABC poem is a jewel of perfection. Sadly, I have no sixes left with which to rate it properly, but you managed to stay true to form while still maintaining flawless meter and lovely rhyme.

Best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024

Thanks, Dawn. Tied for second.

reply by Dawn Munro on 06-Jan-2024

Congratulations!

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

The storm of life is present in this poem. I can feel the angry swirling wind and the rush of the Almighty; but you and I are safe in thee/Jesus is always present whenever we are.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2023

Thanks, Rosemary. You are right. There are storms on the inside as well as outside.

Comment from Navada

Excellent

I really like the structure and rhyming scheme of this piece and the fact that you've incorporated rhyme along with the other requirements of the entry. Best of luck! :)

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023

Thanks, Navada. Rhyming an ABC poem is a little difficult.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine faithful post filled with spiritual support and the strength to face adversity. I enjoyed your uplifting post and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023

Thanks, Christine. No place better to weather the storm.

Comment from Yusita

Excellent

I truly loved this. The message coupled with the image brings such assurance and peace. This had great flow and you even made the lines rhyme! Great job!

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023

Thanks, Yusita. Assurance and peace with Christ is the way to go.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

You have written for this contest I wish you the very best in the contest. I have a feeling of safety when I was reading your words. May you have a happy new year and may your work be blessed. Patricia.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023

Thanks, Pat. When I saw the post for the contest, these words came in just a few minutes.

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

A beautiful poem of faith and trust in our savior. Every time the world threatens to overwhelm me, I run to him for safety! Though he probably wishes it didn't take bad circumstances to call us towards him. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023

Thanks, Julie. You are right. He would like to hear from us in the good times, also.