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At least it was a warm day

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Comment from Navada
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I think you've met the brief really well here and I think the artwork really helps to add an extra dollop of humour as well! Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023
    Thank You!
Comment from Julie Helms
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I think you nailed the prompt! This was quite humorous even though it should be sad because somebody died. I liked the second line "pushed me away said I couldn't tagalong". It made me think of a younger sibling, who normally was well tolerated by the elder. Best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023
    Thank You!