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Guess you can't have everything
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Comment from
Brenda Strauser
I hate going to the Laundromat especially if it is full. Also, it has become so expensive. I have never gotten that luck to not have to pay for it. Well written story. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
euagh! Been a while since I've been to the laundromat but I can relate (lol). Don't think the price of college washing machines and dryers are any better. Funny enough when I first went (given the tuition that's being paid) I thought it'd be free (not counting the expense of Tide pods etc), but I guess not! And not only that, it's a pain!!!! GRRRRRR...but glad you enjoyed! (haha...)
Comment from
Wendy G
It was interesting but I wondered about the ending which did not circle back to what I thought was the main story, the situation in the laundry room. But I guess it was a snapshot of your day and thoughts.
Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 31-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
Mm. Thanks for the feedback. I'll use this feedback to improve. Glad you found it interesting and happy new year!
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