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Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I would suggest going through this again from a technical standpoint. It requires numerous punctuation marks and maybe changing up the sentence length here and there. At present it's quite hard to read.
As this is a competition piece, it should be as clean as possible.
All the best
GMG
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Hi there,
I would suggest going through this again from a technical standpoint. It requires numerous punctuation marks and maybe changing up the sentence length here and there. At present it's quite hard to read.
As this is a competition piece, it should be as clean as possible.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 02-Jan-2024
Comment from Tetamarina66
Cute story and congrats to being the 1rst milestone on here regarding your posting.
Happy new year.
All the best in 2024. Feel free to check out my postings
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Cute story and congrats to being the 1rst milestone on here regarding your posting.
Happy new year.
All the best in 2024. Feel free to check out my postings
Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
