Time lost
This poem is about a girl lost in love.2 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
I enjoyed this form and powerful message within. Wonderfully written and presented in short verse poetry. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes in the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :))
  |
I enjoyed this form and powerful message within. Wonderfully written and presented in short verse poetry. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes in the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
Comment from Debbie Pope
I'm glad to have a new, creative mind to explore. Welcome. I like your poem very much. It's my kind of love poem. It's real. You hit the mark with the line "was it even worth the cost." You hit it again with your words "pay again." Romantic love is complex, and often ends in such a devastating way. Although it can be fulfilling and beautiful, it often ruins lives.
You got al that in your perfectly formatted trident. Nice work.
|
I'm glad to have a new, creative mind to explore. Welcome. I like your poem very much. It's my kind of love poem. It's real. You hit the mark with the line "was it even worth the cost." You hit it again with your words "pay again." Romantic love is complex, and often ends in such a devastating way. Although it can be fulfilling and beautiful, it often ruins lives.
You got al that in your perfectly formatted trident. Nice work.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
