The Saga of Procrastination
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "The frog"Collection
7 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's been my experience in life that most people seem to love themselves more than they deserve and examine everyone else with critical eyes. And I'm sure they see in mirrors what they'd like to be. I just avoid mirrors and try not to croak. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
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It's been my experience in life that most people seem to love themselves more than they deserve and examine everyone else with critical eyes. And I'm sure they see in mirrors what they'd like to be. I just avoid mirrors and try not to croak. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
Comment from Gerard F Keogh
It is sarcastic and it is coherent and wends its way towards the conclusion. You seem to have a natural knack for dialogue and that is good for you and your writing going forward. Thank you, GK
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It is sarcastic and it is coherent and wends its way towards the conclusion. You seem to have a natural knack for dialogue and that is good for you and your writing going forward. Thank you, GK
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
Comment from Navada
Those frogs can look and sound cute, but it turns out that a lot of them are really toads! I'm with you on the whole princess taking care of herself philosophy. Thanks for the share! :)
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Those frogs can look and sound cute, but it turns out that a lot of them are really toads! I'm with you on the whole princess taking care of herself philosophy. Thanks for the share! :)
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Someone once that they found love when they weren't looking. Hmm, something to think about. I enjoyed reading. This was creative and fun to read.
"There is nothing to worry about your pretty face. I am just thinking "aloud."
(to worry your pretty face about???) Maybe aloud in italics otherwise it's confusing.)
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Someone once that they found love when they weren't looking. Hmm, something to think about. I enjoyed reading. This was creative and fun to read.
"There is nothing to worry about your pretty face. I am just thinking "aloud."
(to worry your pretty face about???) Maybe aloud in italics otherwise it's confusing.)
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
Comment from estory
Loved the self depreciating humor in this one, especially at the punch line at the end. It speaks to the age old wisdom of knowing thyself before you try and add someone else to the mix. You have to know what you want, and you can't just trust to random kissing of frogs. estory
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Loved the self depreciating humor in this one, especially at the punch line at the end. It speaks to the age old wisdom of knowing thyself before you try and add someone else to the mix. You have to know what you want, and you can't just trust to random kissing of frogs. estory
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
Comment from Julie Helms
What a great conversation. It flows so well. Lots of humor, lots of truths! Wonderful insight... First you must love yourself and the rest will follow.
Just a question... Did you mean to put princess in the line... Why do I need a princess? That's fine if you did, but it sounds like you meant to put prince from the previous line. Also this font is really hard to read with my old eyes. It's beautiful but I had to blow it up big to see it. And that may just be my problem.
Thank you for sharing this insightful and humorous story. I enjoyed it! Julie.
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What a great conversation. It flows so well. Lots of humor, lots of truths! Wonderful insight... First you must love yourself and the rest will follow.
Just a question... Did you mean to put princess in the line... Why do I need a princess? That's fine if you did, but it sounds like you meant to put prince from the previous line. Also this font is really hard to read with my old eyes. It's beautiful but I had to blow it up big to see it. And that may just be my problem.
Thank you for sharing this insightful and humorous story. I enjoyed it! Julie.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
Comment from lyenochka
Well, I think you have a good plan and I hope God provides you all you need to "laugh, write, and travel." Anyway, another type of F.R.O.G. is an acronym for "Fully Rely On God." That's a frog you won't mind.
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Well, I think you have a good plan and I hope God provides you all you need to "laugh, write, and travel." Anyway, another type of F.R.O.G. is an acronym for "Fully Rely On God." That's a frog you won't mind.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024