Togetherness
A two-in-one offer4 total reviews
Comment from Jeano
A happy story in 17 syllables, only 14 words, 66 letters. Sometimes it doesn't take a lot of words to convey a message. You did this well. Nicely done.
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A happy story in 17 syllables, only 14 words, 66 letters. Sometimes it doesn't take a lot of words to convey a message. You did this well. Nicely done.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
Comment from Tetamarina66
This is good. I wish I knew how to do 123 poems such as yours.
I have had posted 2 new goodies today and more are coming tomorrow.
Gaaah there goes that stupid character limitation going on again.
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This is good. I wish I knew how to do 123 poems such as yours.
I have had posted 2 new goodies today and more are coming tomorrow.
Gaaah there goes that stupid character limitation going on again.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
Comment from Sabrina H.
What a sweet poem. So few words, yet very descriptive. The picture you used just adds to your words. Best of luck on the contest and thank you for sharing.
Keep writing:)
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What a sweet poem. So few words, yet very descriptive. The picture you used just adds to your words. Best of luck on the contest and thank you for sharing.
Keep writing:)
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
Comment from Yusita
This is such a lovely and sweet 5-7-5 poem. With so few words at one's disposal, one cannot afford to waste any syllables--and you haven't! Each word was profound, meaningful, and carefully placed.
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This is such a lovely and sweet 5-7-5 poem. With so few words at one's disposal, one cannot afford to waste any syllables--and you haven't! Each word was profound, meaningful, and carefully placed.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
