Found under A Bar stool
Love lost might still be there..6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I read love lost, yet the yearning for the that love is still very strong. I could feel as I read this contest entry. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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I read love lost, yet the yearning for the that love is still very strong. I could feel as I read this contest entry. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your review. It does ask for and project a need to be felt and I am glad you felt it. That makes all very worthwhile. Warm regards from GK
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Omigoodness!! What an excellent job you did with this reworking of that old classic tune. I'm a music teacher, so I am particularly cognizant of rhythms and meters and rhymes, and all of these are spot-on. I'm so glad I had the opportunity to check this out today! Best of luck to you in the Love Poem Poetry Contest!! xo
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Omigoodness!! What an excellent job you did with this reworking of that old classic tune. I'm a music teacher, so I am particularly cognizant of rhythms and meters and rhymes, and all of these are spot-on. I'm so glad I had the opportunity to check this out today! Best of luck to you in the Love Poem Poetry Contest!! xo
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you so very much. It is an honor to be praised by you as I am a musician as well, so I doubly appreciate it. I am so glad that you checked it out as well. I am going to send you another revision rewrite of a famous American popular song shortly and I will be eager to hear what you think. Thank you so much! Regards from Gerard.
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I will love that!! Thank you! xo
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Gerard,
This is is a well written love poem uses repetition and questions to figure out what to do with a relationship where love seems to be fading. Is there a way to revive it? It seems to end in a prayer for understands and reunion.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest,
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Hi Gerard,
This is is a well written love poem uses repetition and questions to figure out what to do with a relationship where love seems to be fading. Is there a way to revive it? It seems to end in a prayer for understands and reunion.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest,
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 27-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you so very much for your kind comments. They mean a lot to me since I can honestly say that I felt this one all the way. I am glad that you liked it. Warm regards from Gerard.
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You are most kindly welcome, Gerard.
Joan
Comment from Colorado Owl
This is sad and beautiful. My favoite line is "Please bring back the we". It is easy to enjoy drifting along, in love. We forget that that luscious river needs to be fed and nurtured, or it will dry up. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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This is sad and beautiful. My favoite line is "Please bring back the we". It is easy to enjoy drifting along, in love. We forget that that luscious river needs to be fed and nurtured, or it will dry up. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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I am humbled by your kind words and your review. It really makes it all worthwhile when you are sitting there and searching for the words and the format. Warm regards and a sincere thank you from Gerard.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Love that is lost is mourned for over the years and we reflect on it and yearn to return to those loving days, I could identify with your sentiment here, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Love that is lost is mourned for over the years and we reflect on it and yearn to return to those loving days, I could identify with your sentiment here, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Dolly, go back and read it again and put on Sondheims " Send In The Clowns". It was originally written as a challenge to lyrics to it at a cash bar one night. Tell me what you think if you sing it. Regards and affection GK
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely done for the challenge that you were given. I've appreciate the work, and I wished you the very best with all of your writing. I see that you are relatively new to this site and I wish to welcome you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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This is very nicely done for the challenge that you were given. I've appreciate the work, and I wished you the very best with all of your writing. I see that you are relatively new to this site and I wish to welcome you. Patricia.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Yes, I recently sang it aloud to Sondheim and I was rather pleased that the cadence and feeling were really there. It was a healthy exercise to see if it could be done and that lyric helped me along quite a bit. Thank you and be safe in an unsafe world. Regards, GK