Book Readers
We go places...8 total reviews
Comment from royowen
We've discovered that we have so many books that no one is likely to want, but what the heck, we'll try to give them away, but maybe somebody may want them, a beautifully written poem, (can't remember the name, heh heh) but smooth flow on , great job, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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We've discovered that we have so many books that no one is likely to want, but what the heck, we'll try to give them away, but maybe somebody may want them, a beautifully written poem, (can't remember the name, heh heh) but smooth flow on , great job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you, for this great review. :)
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Mot welcome
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your poem beautifully captures the power of imagination and the escapism found in books. The structure, with its repetition and rhythm, effectively mirrors the themes of the poem, creating a soothing and contemplative mood. The interplay between the scattered thoughts and the immersive world of reading is skillfully portrayed.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Your poem beautifully captures the power of imagination and the escapism found in books. The structure, with its repetition and rhythm, effectively mirrors the themes of the poem, creating a soothing and contemplative mood. The interplay between the scattered thoughts and the immersive world of reading is skillfully portrayed.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much for such a nice review. :)
Comment from Navada
I really like this choice of subject for a loop poem. The illustration at the top is awesome and beautifully captures the theme you explore below. Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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I really like this choice of subject for a loop poem. The illustration at the top is awesome and beautifully captures the theme you explore below. Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you, i appreciate this terrific review. :)
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written loop poem. It sounds great when it is read aloud, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best in the contest. Patricia.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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This is a very well written loop poem. It sounds great when it is read aloud, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best in the contest. Patricia.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you for this exceptional review, it means the world to me. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine loop about getting lost in the words in a book and being taken on a magical journey, I enjoyed your inventive post and your loop is skilfully written, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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A fine loop about getting lost in the words in a book and being taken on a magical journey, I enjoyed your inventive post and your loop is skilfully written, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank yoi, its always so nice to hear from you. :)
Comment from kiwisteveh
Hi, Boogie. You have no loop/link between lines 3 and 4 - an easy fix, I guess.
Apart from that I enjoyed your take on the wonders of reading. It reminds me of Julia Donaldson's poem with a similar theme. I've googled it to share with you below.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
I opened a book and in I strode
Now nobody can find me.
I've left my chair, my house, my road,
My town and my world behind me.
I'm wearing the cloak, I've slipped on the ring,
I've swallowed the magic potion.
I've fought with a dragon, dined with a king
And dived in a bottomless ocean.
I opened a book and made some friends.
I shared their tears and laughter
And followed their road with its bumps and bends
To the happily ever after.
I finished my book and out I came.
The cloak can no longer hide me.
My chair and my house are just the same,
But I have a book inside me.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Hi, Boogie. You have no loop/link between lines 3 and 4 - an easy fix, I guess.
Apart from that I enjoyed your take on the wonders of reading. It reminds me of Julia Donaldson's poem with a similar theme. I've googled it to share with you below.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
I opened a book and in I strode
Now nobody can find me.
I've left my chair, my house, my road,
My town and my world behind me.
I'm wearing the cloak, I've slipped on the ring,
I've swallowed the magic potion.
I've fought with a dragon, dined with a king
And dived in a bottomless ocean.
I opened a book and made some friends.
I shared their tears and laughter
And followed their road with its bumps and bends
To the happily ever after.
I finished my book and out I came.
The cloak can no longer hide me.
My chair and my house are just the same,
But I have a book inside me.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you for reading my poem and for the great suggestion...i've already changed it. I've never read that poem before, l love it! Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Julie Helms
Excellent loop poem. These so often are awkward to read, and yours flows beautifully and the content makes sense.
Only suggestion is to change "while away the hours" to "wile away the hours"
Thanks for sharing! Julie.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Excellent loop poem. These so often are awkward to read, and yours flows beautifully and the content makes sense.
Only suggestion is to change "while away the hours" to "wile away the hours"
Thanks for sharing! Julie.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you for taking time to read my poem, and for your helpful suggestion. I appreciate both. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This loop poem, Book Readers, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that a book can be the key to finding out how to do things, or how they were done.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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This loop poem, Book Readers, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that a book can be the key to finding out how to do things, or how they were done.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much.
