A Good Thing to Do
Running promotes good health.2 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is very good for the challenge. Yes, taking a walk or run by the ocean, with the blue sky above, is familiar to me. When I was younger, I lived near the Atlantic Ocean and there is nothing more invigorating than the ocean breeze air and the salt water. Your post brings back my own good memories. And, this is written well with excellent imagery to support your poem. Best wishes!
Alex
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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This is very good for the challenge. Yes, taking a walk or run by the ocean, with the blue sky above, is familiar to me. When I was younger, I lived near the Atlantic Ocean and there is nothing more invigorating than the ocean breeze air and the salt water. Your post brings back my own good memories. And, this is written well with excellent imagery to support your poem. Best wishes!
Alex
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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Thanks for the read and feedback. Happy the piece brought back good memories.
Comment from RodG
On a balmy day what is better than a beach run? Hopefully, the sand is hard-packed and there's a salty breeze to keep you cool. Your poem brought back great memories. Rod
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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On a balmy day what is better than a beach run? Hopefully, the sand is hard-packed and there's a salty breeze to keep you cool. Your poem brought back great memories. Rod
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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Thanks for the read and feedback. Happy the piece brought back good memories.