Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao,

This is a cool take on the well known saying:

eyes are the window to our souls.

I love the title : Gateway to you

And your artwork chosen.

PS: you need to re-read the requirements, the three last words :

Face
Self
You

must rhyme.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024

thanks so much for reading and pointing out what i missed

reply by tempeste on 17-Jan-2024

It?s happened to me a couple of times 😉

Take care ! 🍀

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

What a moving and romantic poem. It's lovely and flows well. I would mention that the prompt states that the first, second, and third line must rhyme. Just wanted to mention it. Good luck.. it's lovely.

Melissa

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024

thanks so much for pointing out the rhyme requirement--i will try to do something about it

Comment from QC Poet

Excellent

I really like how you packed such a great inner searching into a 1-6-1 poetic format. Thank you for Sharing your perspective and Great work. Blessings to you and yours

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024

thanks for reading and responding