Listen! You'll Hear It!
love's language quietly spoken2 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao !
The topic of LOVE is always welcomed and I love the artwork and colour scheme.
PS: just a reminder : the last three words must rhyme
Love
Of
Heart
don't.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Ciao !
The topic of LOVE is always welcomed and I love the artwork and colour scheme.
PS: just a reminder : the last three words must rhyme
Love
Of
Heart
don't.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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My only excuse is that I am ending another covid outbreak. Thanks for warning me. I had to change my words as my former words did not fit into the mold. You may change or withdraw your ratings if you wish.
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I prefer the second version , it?s very sweet. 🥹
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Thank you for your help and kind words! I learn so much from you wonderful FS writers!
Comment from Sugarray77
Your lovely and flowing verse is beautiful and so wistful. I thinks its wonderful. I would mention that the prompt states that the first, second, and third lines must all rhyme. Just mentioning it. Good luck. Lovely poem.
Melissa
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Your lovely and flowing verse is beautiful and so wistful. I thinks its wonderful. I would mention that the prompt states that the first, second, and third lines must all rhyme. Just mentioning it. Good luck. Lovely poem.
Melissa
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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My only excuse is that I am ending another covid outbreak. Thanks for warning me. I had to change my words as my former words did not fit into the mold. You may change or withdraw your ratings if you wish.