Mama's Footsteps
Are we really so different--mothers and daughters?47 total reviews
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
It's clear that even though they are as different as can be, both mother and daughter were also similar in many ways, following different sides of the same coin and discovering that both sides can shine as brightly.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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It's clear that even though they are as different as can be, both mother and daughter were also similar in many ways, following different sides of the same coin and discovering that both sides can shine as brightly.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova. I appreciate your feedback. (Sorry for the late reply. I've just now recovered from two back-to-back sicknesses: occupational hazard of being a teacher--and not one I would trade for the world.) Thank you again for reading.
Comment from June Sargent
I can relate to your words from the standpoint of is daughter. In many ways I am very much like my mom. And yet, I'm still my own person. I see my daughter's traits reflecting mine at times. And then at other times, she is more like her dad. The thread that joins us genetically is apparent snd strong. A form of immortality.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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I can relate to your words from the standpoint of is daughter. In many ways I am very much like my mom. And yet, I'm still my own person. I see my daughter's traits reflecting mine at times. And then at other times, she is more like her dad. The thread that joins us genetically is apparent snd strong. A form of immortality.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, June. I appreciate your feedback. (Sorry for the late reply. I've just now recovered from two back-to-back sicknesses: occupational hazard of being a teacher--and not one I would trade for the world.) Thank you again for reading.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a very sensitive, well written work and I was able to relate to it as both a daughter to a mom who has passed, and a mom to a daughter who is estranged on and off. We all have a thread connecting us. It's true.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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This is a very sensitive, well written work and I was able to relate to it as both a daughter to a mom who has passed, and a mom to a daughter who is estranged on and off. We all have a thread connecting us. It's true.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Alex. I appreciate your feedback. (Sorry for the late reply. I've just now recovered from two back-to-back sicknesses: occupational hazard of being a teacher--and not one I would trade for the world.) Thank you again for reading.
Comment from Daylily
It is wonderful to have had such a positive relationship with your mother and I am sorry she is gone. Maternal influences can last a lifetime. Still, we need to leave our own footprints as we travel a winding path through time. Unfortunately, not all parents are ideal. When certain negative upbringings are overcome, it is a good thing to celebrate, as well. I am glad I read your positive poetry today.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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It is wonderful to have had such a positive relationship with your mother and I am sorry she is gone. Maternal influences can last a lifetime. Still, we need to leave our own footprints as we travel a winding path through time. Unfortunately, not all parents are ideal. When certain negative upbringings are overcome, it is a good thing to celebrate, as well. I am glad I read your positive poetry today.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Daylily. I appreciate your feedback. You've made a great point about the positive and negative impacts. (Sorry for the late reply. I've just now recovered from two back-to-back sicknesses: occupational hazard of being a teacher--and not one I would trade for the world.) Thank you again for reading.
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I am sorry you have been ill. Thank you for your supportive comments!
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading this poem. I think I learned from my mom that you have to be your true self.., earn from her. The words and pictures match nicely. Great job
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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I enjoyed reading this poem. I think I learned from my mom that you have to be your true self.., earn from her. The words and pictures match nicely. Great job
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Brenda. I appreciate your feedback. Yes, when she first died, I thought I had to be exactly like her, but I've since learned it's important to be the woman I am, but still be inspired by her life and legacy. (Sorry for the late reply. I've just now recovered from two back-to-back sicknesses: occupational hazard of being a teacher--and not one I would trade for the world.) Thank you again for reading.
Comment from Jacob1395
I definitely think that mothers and daughters are more similar than we think. I really enjoyed reading this piece and I thought your writing flowed really well.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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I definitely think that mothers and daughters are more similar than we think. I really enjoyed reading this piece and I thought your writing flowed really well.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Jacob. I appreciate your feedback. (Sorry for the late reply. I've just now recovered from two back-to-back sicknesses: occupational hazard of being a teacher--and not one I would trade for the world.) Thank you again for reading.
Comment from Christine Currie
Don't be too hard on yourself - the majority of women follow in their mother's footsteps even when they spend every waking moment trying not to. The poem reflects this reality of life very eloquently. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Don't be too hard on yourself - the majority of women follow in their mother's footsteps even when they spend every waking moment trying not to. The poem reflects this reality of life very eloquently. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Christine. I appreciate your feedback. (Sorry for the late reply. I've just now recovered from two back-to-back sicknesses: occupational hazard of being a teacher--and not one I would trade for the world.) Thank you again for reading.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a fabulous poem, very loving, sad in places, but your mother would be so very proud of the woman you've turned into. She left her legacy in you. We can never replace our mums, but we can honour them in the way you have. My mum died in January 2014, and I still miss her, and talk to her photo. Beautiful poem! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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What a fabulous poem, very loving, sad in places, but your mother would be so very proud of the woman you've turned into. She left her legacy in you. We can never replace our mums, but we can honour them in the way you have. My mum died in January 2014, and I still miss her, and talk to her photo. Beautiful poem! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Sandra. I appreciate your feedback. Yes, she did leave her legacy in me, and I'm doing what I can to pass it onto my students and (hopefully one day) my own children. (Sorry for the late reply. I've just now recovered from two back-to-back sicknesses: occupational hazard of being a teacher--and not one I would trade for the world.) Thank you again for reading.
Comment from jim vecchio
This touched my heart and really deserves more than five stars, but that's the most I have. I thought of my mother. I never had problems with my college grades, so I partied, was a total jerk and broke my parents' hearts, till God straightened me out. I was at my mother's side shortly before her last breath. I asked her if she loved me. As sick as she was, she answered, "I loved you ever since you were born."
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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This touched my heart and really deserves more than five stars, but that's the most I have. I thought of my mother. I never had problems with my college grades, so I partied, was a total jerk and broke my parents' hearts, till God straightened me out. I was at my mother's side shortly before her last breath. I asked her if she loved me. As sick as she was, she answered, "I loved you ever since you were born."
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Jim. I appreciate your feedback. I'm glad you were with her before she passed. What special words to hear from your mother; a mother's love--it knows no bounds, and I'm glad you experienced that. (Sorry for the late reply. I've just now recovered from two back-to-back sicknesses: occupational hazard of being a teacher--and not one I would trade for the world.) Thank you again for reading.
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I hope The Lord blesses you with good heath and freedom from pain-You deserve it!
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Thank you; that means a lot. I am getting better. Hopefully, I make it to the end of the school year without anymore major sicknesses.
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I hope you will enjoy many blessings from now on!
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Thank you. I hope you do as well.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
powerful and moving poem about life, choices, becoming one's parents. interesting how you ended up in Arkansas. My mother grew up there and ended up in California. She died in 2005.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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powerful and moving poem about life, choices, becoming one's parents. interesting how you ended up in Arkansas. My mother grew up there and ended up in California. She died in 2005.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Jake. I appreciate your feedback. Yes, I find it interesting, too. Wow. I had to get out of California, as it was getting crazy. I hope life there was good for your mom while she lived there. (Sorry for the late reply. I've just now recovered from two back-to-back sicknesses: occupational hazard of being a teacher--and not one I would trade for the world.) Thank you again for reading.
