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Consoling my daughter

This consoles me, as much as it does her:)

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Comment from Sugarray77
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This is a beautiful sentiment to share in this prompt and a clever choice for a small, small poem. A great job on your rhyme choices and I wish you luck in this contest!

Melissa

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
    Many thanks Melissa
Comment from rjuselius
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This is a lovely thought dear anonymous! When my goddaughter was young, i would stroke her hair until she would fall asleep.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
    Thank you Rebekka
Comment from Navada
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There is something very soothing about someone stroking your hair - I agree. You've met the requirements for syllable structure and rhyme.
Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
    Thank you