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Now, That's Love!

Boy, do we need it now!

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Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Wouldn't you burn it into fiery oblivion, though? Shame on me getting all "science" in the presence of a love note. What's wrong with me!

Very cute poem, and you certainly found the perfect picture to express it, too! Good luck in the contest, Mystery Writer! xoxo

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2024

Comment from RFL
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Great two lines! And the image is a wonderful companion to your words.This is probably something you say to the person you love, or maybe you already have. Good contest entry. Best of luck.

RFL

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
    Thank you. I'm not even sure two lines is a poem, though once I posted a two word poem, but this was fun writing.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Wonderful entry for the Two Line Poetry Contest. You even made it rhyme. It's very romantic.

Well done

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis    

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
    If it was romantic, it must be some of the inspiration I've caught from your poems.
reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 20-Jan-2024
    Thank you (*÷*) I love romantic poetry.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
    I love writing about love, but, unless I have a unique take on it, I don't want it to sound trite.
Comment from Sally Law
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This is one of the hardest poetry forms there is. Must have internal and external rhyme in two lines. You nailed it. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the upcoming contest. Sally :))

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
    It is hard to say anything in two lines, but fun and always teaches me to not take any word for granted.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
    It is hard to say anything in two lines, but fun and always teaches me to not take any word for granted.
Comment from Yusita
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This is so sweet and creative... a worthy entry for the two line contest. I like that you also made both lines rhyme. Well done and good luck to you in the contest!

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
    Thank you so much! Your review was sweet!