Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This two-lined poem, Aurora Transformalia, has the required two lines and
has man meet the morning for a new bond with nature and the future of humanity.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024

Thanks, Bill.

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

It is wonderful how our creative God paints the morning each day in a bright and unexpected way! These brief lines packed a vivid image! One question: this site goes crazy sometimes and loads notes or titles with unwanted punctuation. Did you mean for the title to have that punctuation?

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024

Thanks, Jim. No. The punctuation marks seem to have a life of their own. (Now there?s an idea for a story?.)

reply by jim vecchio on 21-Jan-2024

I don't know why I didn't think of that! Go with it!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I enjoyed the sentiment and rhyming words here and wish you luck with the contest, nature's ability to bring a new day is always hopeful and enjoyed able, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024

Thanks, Dolly. Apologies for the rogue punctuation.