The Knock
The knock on the door brings a guest and surprising events.2 total reviews
Comment from Allieas
Wow, I found your story to be gripping from start to finish. The flow and pace were perfect, your characters believable and sympathetic, and no errors that I could find. Thanks for posting, and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Wow, I found your story to be gripping from start to finish. The flow and pace were perfect, your characters believable and sympathetic, and no errors that I could find. Thanks for posting, and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Thank you so very much! I appreciate your review!
Best wishes in your writing
Comment from Sabrina H.
Wow, what a great and intriguing story. Nice twist with her playing a video of the murder, I was not expecting that.
Your story has great flow and I didn't see any error.
Best of luck on the contest.
Keep writing:)
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Wow, what a great and intriguing story. Nice twist with her playing a video of the murder, I was not expecting that.
Your story has great flow and I didn't see any error.
Best of luck on the contest.
Keep writing:)
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Thank you so very much! I appreciate your review!
Best wishes in your writing
