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Mind Fog Distractions

When the unexpected enters one's mind.

4 total reviews 
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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Oh I relate to your well written and well presented, Haiku. I have MS so my brain plays tricks sometimes and I also get insomnia due to thinking. I best like when daydreams take over, the good stuff. Well done!

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
    Thank you, Alexandra for your review.
Comment from Annmuma
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I like this poem. Mind Fog is something I seem to deal with more and more often. I am easily distracted --- but usually pleasantly so! Good luck in the contest. ann

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
    Thank You Annmuma. Our world is changing. It is hard to keep up with everything.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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I liked this poem. I've never seen any like this. I'm new to fanstory, so I'm just learning. The picture is so neat. The colors are so bold and stand out. Great job

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
    Thank you, Brenda, for your review. A big welcome to Fanstory.
Comment from Tyler Withrow
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Distractive mind bombs. Very good job. Also, it was almost ominous to have such language with the ice shard perched above some unsuspecting entity just out of frame. I liked it.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
    Overwhelming anxiety can be felt and seen. The ice shard was likened to degree of distractions. Could you re-evaluate. (Mind imagery)
    Thank you.