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Hare in the pot.

Taste good like a bunny should.

10 total reviews 
Comment from Caroline M England
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Excellent! Love it! Very to the point and humorous. Love the cleverness of the poem, how much of a story you have managed to create with so few words, taking us through the events in sequence and even included the bunny dynamics with hippity hop. Great job - good luck with this one.
Best wishes

Caroline

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
    Thank you so much, Caroline. It was a fun write. (;-)
Comment from QC Poet
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A funny short poem post and probably the way most magician helpers end up- in a pot. LOL
Thanks for Sharing your true as I read in the note rabbit tail Saved For Good Luck

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
    Thanks, QC. Gotta save the rabbits foot for sure. (;-)
Comment from tempeste
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Ciao!.

Is this a shot at dark humour?

Seeing the picture I thought it was about a magician instead it's about cooking a rabbit. I would prefer the rabbit was hopping merrily in a field rather than than being cooked.

Have you ever seen the killer bunny in Monty Python ? Now that was funny. ( biggrin)

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
    Ah yes, the Holy Hand Grenade from Antioch!!

    Thanks for your review and twisted humor. A happy, Hare, hopping merrily through the clover? O, tiz a site I wish not to see this early in the morning. (;-o)
Comment from Wy Jung
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I'm giving 5 stars because this little rhyme is clever and funny.
Here is my limerick based on your little ditty!
There once was a magical bunny
Who feared his magician Sonny,
When Sonny opened a pot
and plopped bunny on top
He thought Dammit, I knew this smelt funny.



 Comment Written 26-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
    Thank you for the example. However, CEC already disqualified it as a Limerick entry. Perhaps, you could look at it as free verse and adjust your stars. I would appreciate it. If not, I understand. I'll just take it down.
    All the best, Yard.
reply by Wy Jung on 26-Jan-2024
    I changed it ! Thank you for the inspiration for my own! I hope you won't take it down. :)
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
    So funny. I'm glad you were inspired. I really hope you win. Now that would be something!
    Thank you for the extra star. I won't take it down.
reply by Wy Jung on 26-Jan-2024
    Ha! I didn't enter it in the contest, only shared it hare (punny spelling intended) between us. I have a piece I really want to stay up on there for review, but then also accepted a challenge not thinking about it knocking that one down a notch on my portfolio... so, don't want to bury it further being goofy with limericks. (My grandfather Lee was a master at Limericks so we got lots of practice growing up... Fun to have a challenge !)
Comment from royowen
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Oh that poor little bunny! I haven't had rabbit stew for many, may moons, and believe it or not, it made my mouth water just thinking of my mum's cooking, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
    Lol! Thank you sir.
reply by royowen on 26-Jan-2024
    Most welcome
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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This is a sad poem. We have a bunny in our family who is very active in a child's school day. I cannot imagine a bunny being eaten for a meal when it is your pet. Ouch!

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
    Thank you, Rosemary. No, don't eat the pet (;-)
Comment from Sabrina H.
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I like bunnies so this was sad to me. Besides that, the syllable count is on spot and your poem has good flow and rhythm.
Best of luck on the contest.
Keep writing:)

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
    Thank you, Sabrina.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Magic in a pot, don't eat the prompt please:)"A man appeared.

Bunny feared.

Hot pot.

Hippity hop.

Yum bunny! " Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
    Many thanks.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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This is so funny. I like the idea. It is so clever. That is surely a different way of having a bunny disappear. Picture matches words very good. Great job

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
    Thank you, Brenda!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A fun poem, but the magical metre for this Limerick is missing, nevertheless it was a humorous read and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x x x

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
    Much thanks!