Life is a blink
May you leave this world without regrets6 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
I love this poem. It rhymes, and I like poems that rhyme. It uses all the words required by the prompt. And it is such a nice reminder to live life to the fullest.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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I love this poem. It rhymes, and I like poems that rhyme. It uses all the words required by the prompt. And it is such a nice reminder to live life to the fullest.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from Jane Jane King
There are some wise truisms here. Your point that we can't get back the past is a good reason for making the best of the present. VER NICELY WRITTEN. Really make me think.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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There are some wise truisms here. Your point that we can't get back the past is a good reason for making the best of the present. VER NICELY WRITTEN. Really make me think.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Julie Helms
You've done a good job with kind of an awkward combination of required words! You seamlessly fit them into your narrative of your poem.
This line particularly hit me:
"Time sure slips by fast leaving lasting memories behind."
Just yesterday I was singing songs to my seven-month-old granddaughter that I remember singing as a child. Where on earth did all that time go, and so quickly? I remember it like it was very recently. And your line nailed that thought!
Thanks so much for sharing! Julie
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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You've done a good job with kind of an awkward combination of required words! You seamlessly fit them into your narrative of your poem.
This line particularly hit me:
"Time sure slips by fast leaving lasting memories behind."
Just yesterday I was singing songs to my seven-month-old granddaughter that I remember singing as a child. Where on earth did all that time go, and so quickly? I remember it like it was very recently. And your line nailed that thought!
Thanks so much for sharing! Julie
Comment Written 26-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much Julie glad you like it 🙂
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I think you have quite cleverly, eloquently and seamlessly incorporated these difficult prompt words into your verse. You have clearly given it a lot of thought and presented a beautiful post. A strong contender! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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I think you have quite cleverly, eloquently and seamlessly incorporated these difficult prompt words into your verse. You have clearly given it a lot of thought and presented a beautiful post. A strong contender! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 26-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much Debbie 🙂
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Life does indeed flash by in a blink of an eye and I enjoyed your wise words here, we make memories everyday and it is important to live in the moment, good luck with the contest, you fulfilled he brief here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Life does indeed flash by in a blink of an eye and I enjoyed your wise words here, we make memories everyday and it is important to live in the moment, good luck with the contest, you fulfilled he brief here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Thank you Dolly
Comment from Glenda Collins
So impressive. I wondered what type of poem would contain all of those words so fluently. Very creative and a beautiful message. I enjoyed this. I have written a poem with similar subject matter. Mine was a bit more cynical. I like yours much better :).
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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So impressive. I wondered what type of poem would contain all of those words so fluently. Very creative and a beautiful message. I enjoyed this. I have written a poem with similar subject matter. Mine was a bit more cynical. I like yours much better :).
Best wishes.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much