The Foxes and the Golfers
A Story Poem in Sestets13 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Treischel,
This is a well written witty story that tells both the human and fox side of the story. Tod was very bold. I am glad the family of foxes move on and now everything his back to normal for all. Everyone is a happy camper;
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Enjoy the rest of your weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Hi Treischel,
This is a well written witty story that tells both the human and fox side of the story. Tod was very bold. I am glad the family of foxes move on and now everything his back to normal for all. Everyone is a happy camper;
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Enjoy the rest of your weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Thank you Joan. Soory took so long torespond
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My pleasure, Treischel.
Joan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Although, I'm not a golfer my husband is and I can see the problem. We have a few families of foxes in our neighborhood, and they are stinkers. I enjoyed reading this story in poetic form contest entry. The rhyming is very good as is the flow. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Although, I'm not a golfer my husband is and I can see the problem. We have a few families of foxes in our neighborhood, and they are stinkers. I enjoyed reading this story in poetic form contest entry. The rhyming is very good as is the flow. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Thank you barbara
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I loved this poem!! What a clever story, Tom, young fox Tod was a cunning one. Lol. The fox must have cost the golfers a fortune in golf balls. What a fun poem, my friend. I'm sorry I haven't been around reviewing much, I'm having trouble with my breathing and sometimes I just can't sit for long at the laptop. I go to the hospital on the 16th for loads of tests. Hopefully I'll get some answers. Anyway, this was an epic poem and I'm so pleased you mentioned it. Well done! :))Sandra xxx
I'll catch up with the rest later. xxx
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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I loved this poem!! What a clever story, Tom, young fox Tod was a cunning one. Lol. The fox must have cost the golfers a fortune in golf balls. What a fun poem, my friend. I'm sorry I haven't been around reviewing much, I'm having trouble with my breathing and sometimes I just can't sit for long at the laptop. I go to the hospital on the 16th for loads of tests. Hopefully I'll get some answers. Anyway, this was an epic poem and I'm so pleased you mentioned it. Well done! :))Sandra xxx
I'll catch up with the rest later. xxx
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you Sandra. I knew you could appreciate it. Not as clever as your fairy/witch story, but a fun write. I hope and pray that your health will be resolved soon.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nicely done poem about foxes. they are special creatures. I have seen wild foxes in various places including here in Korea. I once saw a wild fox run across the street from the State Department. THat was wild.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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nicely done poem about foxes. they are special creatures. I have seen wild foxes in various places including here in Korea. I once saw a wild fox run across the street from the State Department. THat was wild.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Thank you Jake. They are special. The even can adapt to city living.I appreciate your review and comments.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 'Share A Story In A Poem contest'.
Excellent poem that I can admire how well it sounds with the sestet scheme and perfect rhymes. I'm not an expert, I write free verse and Japanese poetry but from my humble opinion you did a wonderful job. Good luck!
Well done
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Excellent entry for the 'Share A Story In A Poem contest'.
Excellent poem that I can admire how well it sounds with the sestet scheme and perfect rhymes. I'm not an expert, I write free verse and Japanese poetry but from my humble opinion you did a wonderful job. Good luck!
Well done
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Thank you Gypsy, I really appreciate your review and comments. I am pleased that you enjoyed it. Have a wonderful day.
Comment from Lisasview
I did not realise that your poem was for Share a Story in A Poem...but as I read it I thought...Wow, this isa complete story in a poem...
Loved it and look forward to you winning the contest!!
Lisa
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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I did not realise that your poem was for Share a Story in A Poem...but as I read it I thought...Wow, this isa complete story in a poem...
Loved it and look forward to you winning the contest!!
Lisa
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Thank you Lisa, for your review and comments. I am pleased that you enjoyed it. That would be great if I did, but who knows? Appreciate your words of encouragement.
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You are welcome.
Lisa
Comment from Dawn Munro
So far I have read as far as "Angry foxes, much like the golfers" and I'm crackin' up. Please, don't you dare make this anything but a happy ending!!! What a delight!
I am roaring with laughter, reading this aloud. My unit's door is open. I think my neighbors think I'm nuts. Hahahahaha!
"..It did occur
to Tom, that exit was the best routine." HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Thank you for the awesome notes, too -- bookcase, so I have something to use for reference if I try one of these sometime... :))
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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So far I have read as far as "Angry foxes, much like the golfers" and I'm crackin' up. Please, don't you dare make this anything but a happy ending!!! What a delight!
I am roaring with laughter, reading this aloud. My unit's door is open. I think my neighbors think I'm nuts. Hahahahaha!
"..It did occur
to Tom, that exit was the best routine." HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Thank you for the awesome notes, too -- bookcase, so I have something to use for reference if I try one of these sometime... :))
Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Wow! Thank you Dawn for such a rollicking review. I am contagiously laughing with you now. Can?t help it. Seriously, I appreciate your time to read this long poem, and then award a very special six. You made my day.
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Very much my pleasure. :))
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written story in a poem that you have presented us with, for the story and a poem contest I wish you the very best in the contest. I enjoyed very much listening to this, as it moved along well, when Retta allowed. May you have a wonderful day, and God bless.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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This is a very well written story in a poem that you have presented us with, for the story and a poem contest I wish you the very best in the contest. I enjoyed very much listening to this, as it moved along well, when Retta allowed. May you have a wonderful day, and God bless.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Thank you Patricia. I always appreciate your support.
Comment from royowen
The fox is a unique creature in the minds of men. Holding to a reputation of a cunningness to survive, but it is very small for a predator, and could torn apart by a single dog, although through man's cruel sport, not very sate, man is the worst predator, beautifully written and processed in a definite form, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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The fox is a unique creature in the minds of men. Holding to a reputation of a cunningness to survive, but it is very small for a predator, and could torn apart by a single dog, although through man's cruel sport, not very sate, man is the worst predator, beautifully written and processed in a definite form, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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Thank you Roy. Man is the most dangerous predator indeed. Thank you for the review and comments.
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Well done
Comment from John Ciarmello
This was a great read!
I enjoyed that this was told from the animal's point of view and would make a good publication of a children's story.
Enjoyable! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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This was a great read!
I enjoyed that this was told from the animal's point of view and would make a good publication of a children's story.
Enjoyable! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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Thank you John. I'll keep that in mind. This is the third fox story I've written. I told the story of the foxes and the fisherman last week.
