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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
um...this was pure insanity. But I loved it, or course. You have a great mind for creating intricate details which add so much to the stories. Good job!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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um...this was pure insanity. But I loved it, or course. You have a great mind for creating intricate details which add so much to the stories. Good job!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much.
Comment from Baltimore Born
This was a good story. I was looking for more of a "Let's kill Karen" type of story. You gave good details about other things and people. Once again, in my opinion the "Let's kill Karen element is missing.
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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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This was a good story. I was looking for more of a "Let's kill Karen" type of story. You gave good details about other things and people. Once again, in my opinion the "Let's kill Karen element is missing.
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Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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The contest is over. I am the one who wrote the contest. I said I had to be dead, not that had to kill me. In this story I was dead and had been for years.The stories were delightful and full of imagination. I won't tell you my favorite.:-)
Comment from Ric Myworld
I like all these contest entries and wanted to be a part of all the fun myself hadn't it come up at a time I just couldn't manage to find the extra time. Great job. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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I like all these contest entries and wanted to be a part of all the fun myself hadn't it come up at a time I just couldn't manage to find the extra time. Great job. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Thanks so much for the read and nice comments.
Comment from royowen
Good old Miltion made it after all,and it seems that Walter who bit the floor was the only one who didn't really hit the jackpot, what a great life for Milton, Walter was a died in The mill good luck omen, beautifully written my friend, googbluck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Good old Miltion made it after all,and it seems that Walter who bit the floor was the only one who didn't really hit the jackpot, what a great life for Milton, Walter was a died in The mill good luck omen, beautifully written my friend, googbluck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Thanks so much for the read and nice comments.
Karen
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your story was a fun read. There were so many unexpected twists! I love how you take the quiet life of Milton Monroe and turn it on its head when the body is found in his shed. The writing is solid. This is easy to read and easily kept my interest. Great job.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Your story was a fun read. There were so many unexpected twists! I love how you take the quiet life of Milton Monroe and turn it on its head when the body is found in his shed. The writing is solid. This is easy to read and easily kept my interest. Great job.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Thanks so much for the read and nice comments.I will go look at your work.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is an amusing story, but you didn't actually kill Karen as the contest suggests. You killed Walter, who certainly deserved it. Maybe that is what saved Karen. Right?
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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This is an amusing story, but you didn't actually kill Karen as the contest suggests. You killed Walter, who certainly deserved it. Maybe that is what saved Karen. Right?
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Thank you for reading. The contest requires that Karen die or be dead in the story and that her death impact it. Milton is very much his momma's son. Someone got killed in the story, and there was humor in it. I think I got everything. I appreciate your thoughts on the matter. How's Josh coming with the house?
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He's a bit more intrigued with Leila.
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Good, I want them both to pucker up. Let an old lady have her jollies! :-) Karen
Comment from BethShelby
This story is told in such a way that makes it humorous in spite of the dead body in the shed and all the details about Milton's mother. The only thing I'd question was it seemed int placed it went into first person rather than third person as it started and sometimes it changed from past tense to present. May it was meant to be this way.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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This story is told in such a way that makes it humorous in spite of the dead body in the shed and all the details about Milton's mother. The only thing I'd question was it seemed int placed it went into first person rather than third person as it started and sometimes it changed from past tense to present. May it was meant to be this way.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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I will go check. Thanks for the look and edit. Karen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Wow! Pretty detailed work, what with all the part time jobs, and all.
Seems to be error-free. Good work.
What I didn't quite get was how Walter died and came to be in Milton's shed.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Wow! Pretty detailed work, what with all the part time jobs, and all.
Seems to be error-free. Good work.
What I didn't quite get was how Walter died and came to be in Milton's shed.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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No one cared. :-)
Comment from Begin Again
Hello, Karen.... First, I absolutely loved the humorous photo and it set the mood for the story. It was so engaging and I chuckled as it flowed along. Well done! I'm looking forward to reading so much more.
Hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Hello, Karen.... First, I absolutely loved the humorous photo and it set the mood for the story. It was so engaging and I chuckled as it flowed along. Well done! I'm looking forward to reading so much more.
Hugs, Carol
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the read and kind words. I look forward to more from you too. Karen :-)
Comment from Jeano
You killed Walter, not once but twice, but not Karen. I haven't entered this competition but I thought it was Karen we were supposed to knock off. It's a good, humorous yarn you've told here, though. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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You killed Walter, not once but twice, but not Karen. I haven't entered this competition but I thought it was Karen we were supposed to knock off. It's a good, humorous yarn you've told here, though. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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His mother, Karen, died in the story. She only has to die in the story. We don't actually have to kill her. How could I kill her?
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Oh, thanks for that. I misunderstood the rules. It's a great story.