My Favorite Teacher
Sometimes one gets lucky16 total reviews
Comment from XinaD
You did great in such a limited word count :)
I like how there was just a raw, unfiltered response. The teacher handled it much the same I think I would have. After all, how do you condemn someone for reacting the same way you would, right? LOL
Excellent job.
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You did great in such a limited word count :)
I like how there was just a raw, unfiltered response. The teacher handled it much the same I think I would have. After all, how do you condemn someone for reacting the same way you would, right? LOL
Excellent job.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Without those two words, this story would have little meaning. Instead they offer authenticity and humor to your flash. Made me smile. I like your teacher too.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Without those two words, this story would have little meaning. Instead they offer authenticity and humor to your flash. Made me smile. I like your teacher too.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Ginda for reading this post.
Jihn
Comment from Navada
I can vouch for the fact that, as a teacher, something very unexpected can make you laugh even when you know full well that it's inappropriate. Good on her for not punishing you! :)
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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I can vouch for the fact that, as a teacher, something very unexpected can make you laugh even when you know full well that it's inappropriate. Good on her for not punishing you! :)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you for reading. Sorry for the late reply.
I do appreciate you!
John
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a humorous story about a very wise teacher who demonstrated to the class that she would not tolerate such language. She called the guilty student inside so she could have a good laugh. I understand why she is the favorite.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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This is a humorous story about a very wise teacher who demonstrated to the class that she would not tolerate such language. She called the guilty student inside so she could have a good laugh. I understand why she is the favorite.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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LJ.
Ugh? I?m late in replying, sorry!
Thank you for stopping to read this story.
Always appreciated.
John
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
humorous poem
it looks like someone is ready to kick the bucket
shoes can cause some madness when they don't fit
glad the teacher was still his or her favorite
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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humorous poem
it looks like someone is ready to kick the bucket
shoes can cause some madness when they don't fit
glad the teacher was still his or her favorite
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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It was "her" favorite. Thank you for reading,
Comment from Wendy G
Well it did make for a humorous story! Your teacher was very understanding! You wrote it well and the image was very suitable. Sending best wishes for your story.
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Well it did make for a humorous story! Your teacher was very understanding! You wrote it well and the image was very suitable. Sending best wishes for your story.
Wendy
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Wendy.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Teachers are people, too, and it sounds like you both got caught en flagrante: you for swearing, her for finding it hilarious. She covered it like a pro, though --brought you inside so it gave the impression to everyone that you were in big trouble, when, in reality, you were her saviour from trouble with the School Board!!
Great story; I can picture it all. I hope this wins for you. xo
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Teachers are people, too, and it sounds like you both got caught en flagrante: you for swearing, her for finding it hilarious. She covered it like a pro, though --brought you inside so it gave the impression to everyone that you were in big trouble, when, in reality, you were her saviour from trouble with the School Board!!
Great story; I can picture it all. I hope this wins for you. xo
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the vote of confidence.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A tense moment after kicking the rock and totally losing it. I like the way you describe your panic by sweating bullets. A comic little episode which, fortunately, was well received by the teacher. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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A tense moment after kicking the rock and totally losing it. I like the way you describe your panic by sweating bullets. A comic little episode which, fortunately, was well received by the teacher. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Debbie for reading and the well wishes.
Comment from Mia Twysted
When kids first use those swear words that they have heard adults use there whole lives it can be so unexpected. Now, if the other kids heard you that might make your more popular.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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When kids first use those swear words that they have heard adults use there whole lives it can be so unexpected. Now, if the other kids heard you that might make your more popular.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Great review.
Thank you.
Comment from Jeano
Ha! Writing a story that makes sense and only using 50 words isn't exactly easy, but you nailed it. I've seen MF used as two words, one word, all caps, italics, with quotation marks.... The contrast of an eighth-grader feeling grown up and wearing high heels to school, but still with the mentality of a youngster who would kick a rock, is what made this funny for me. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Ha! Writing a story that makes sense and only using 50 words isn't exactly easy, but you nailed it. I've seen MF used as two words, one word, all caps, italics, with quotation marks.... The contrast of an eighth-grader feeling grown up and wearing high heels to school, but still with the mentality of a youngster who would kick a rock, is what made this funny for me. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Great, great review.
Thanks a bunch!
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You're welcome.
