Rascally Rabbits
Furious Fiction competition - Australia3 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a humorous and well-developed story. You've included adequate description, allowing the reader to easily envision the rabbits invading the garden. You've also included realistic dialogue, making your story more believable. I enjoyed this short FuriousFiction competition entry.
Note:
I enjoyed "The Great Cake Event," and decided to pop over to your profile to see what other gems I'd find.
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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This is a humorous and well-developed story. You've included adequate description, allowing the reader to easily envision the rabbits invading the garden. You've also included realistic dialogue, making your story more believable. I enjoyed this short FuriousFiction competition entry.
Note:
I enjoyed "The Great Cake Event," and decided to pop over to your profile to see what other gems I'd find.
Comment Written 04-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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What a nice compliment...checking out my other 'gems.'
Thank you, LJ, for reading this story and for the very nice review.
In real life, a neighbor did give us the right dry mix to keep them somewhat away.
Best regards,
Regarding other stories - if you locate the Teddy Bear Promise, you might have someone young who would enjoy it.
Dick
Comment from royowen
Hahaha, oh yes indeed, that'll get them running like they've never run before. I like the fact that there's something very normal going on. This is such scrum write, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Hahaha, oh yes indeed, that'll get them running like they've never run before. I like the fact that there's something very normal going on. This is such scrum write, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Sorry, Roy, for not responding earlier. Just doing other things.
Thank you very much for taking the time to provide such a nice review. I hope the new bottle of spray actually works for the real rabbits. They are most likely laughing at our attempts to stop them from spending time on the artificial grass.
Best regards,
Dick
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Blessings Dick
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Good writing
Comment from Douglas Goff
Good luck in your Australian competition. I think this is a really fun read.
Rabbits are known to play, but it's usually tags like squirrels play!
Fun!
D
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Good luck in your Australian competition. I think this is a really fun read.
Rabbits are known to play, but it's usually tags like squirrels play!
Fun!
D
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Douglas, for reading this story and for the very nice review. I'm sorry this response is so tardy, but I have been doing some other things.
Thanks again for the review and have a nice day.
Dick
