Footprints in the Sand
my morning walk3 total reviews
Comment from Sarah Tummey
I loved how this created a picture of someone walking along the seafront. Personally, I would have preferred it if you'd split the first line into two and left out the last:
"Savouring my morning walk,
I smell and taste sand and salt".
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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I loved how this created a picture of someone walking along the seafront. Personally, I would have preferred it if you'd split the first line into two and left out the last:
"Savouring my morning walk,
I smell and taste sand and salt".
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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thanks so much for reading and responding
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and alliteration.
-You do a good job describing your walk,
as well as making it a sensory experience
that you enjoyed.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and alliteration.
-You do a good job describing your walk,
as well as making it a sensory experience
that you enjoyed.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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thanks for reading and responding
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You're welcome.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Excellent writing. It is full of good sensory words and vibrant imagery. The image supports your words well. Thank you for sharing this. Many writers will relate to this. I enjoyed reviewing it.
Best wishes!
Alex
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Excellent writing. It is full of good sensory words and vibrant imagery. The image supports your words well. Thank you for sharing this. Many writers will relate to this. I enjoyed reviewing it.
Best wishes!
Alex
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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thanks for reading and responding
