Strange Synchronicity
Fear of the often mysterious and misunderstood5 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Do fruit flies sling mud? I have never heard of this before, or maybe it is a metaphor for chaos here Nichola? This is an unusual write about the comfort someone brings to your life after a busy day as a scientist, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Do fruit flies sling mud? I have never heard of this before, or maybe it is a metaphor for chaos here Nichola? This is an unusual write about the comfort someone brings to your life after a busy day as a scientist, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Ha ha. This poem is not meant to be taken literally. Thanks for your review.
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"Chaos" is a good word to describe it. Thanks!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
There is a surreal quality with your intriguing verse which is entirely fitting for the image. It's quirky and thought-provoking. I love "mud spews out of their mating rituals." This dream sequence is well structured to include a story-line that ends with some relief in those reaching arms. Nicely done! Debbie
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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There is a surreal quality with your intriguing verse which is entirely fitting for the image. It's quirky and thought-provoking. I love "mud spews out of their mating rituals." This dream sequence is well structured to include a story-line that ends with some relief in those reaching arms. Nicely done! Debbie
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful review!
Comment from royowen
Even in the hands of someone that loves you, there is a decline in the way that person may address you, but during times of love's affirmation, there are comforting words, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Even in the hands of someone that loves you, there is a decline in the way that person may address you, but during times of love's affirmation, there are comforting words, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Roy, Thank you so much for your kind response!
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Most welcome
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well written poem. I actually worked with an Entomologist when I worked for Terminex. Your opening lines starts the poem well. Your message in this poem is clear to me. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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This is a well written poem. I actually worked with an Entomologist when I worked for Terminex. Your opening lines starts the poem well. Your message in this poem is clear to me. Nice poem.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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How interesting that you worked with an Entomologist. It is so "other" worldly. Thank you for your thoughtful review!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is very cool. The words flow so well and it is thought provoking. If it were a painting, it would be Surrealistic, possibly. That is my favorite Art style. The image truly supports your words. This is an artistic presentation.
I enjoyed reviewing this. Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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This is very cool. The words flow so well and it is thought provoking. If it were a painting, it would be Surrealistic, possibly. That is my favorite Art style. The image truly supports your words. This is an artistic presentation.
I enjoyed reviewing this. Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Alex, Thank you so much for your thoughtful review. I like surrealism too!
Take care,
Nichola
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Cool. It is wonderful. Thank you, too, Nichola!
