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Emoí G? "noma: My name is Nobody

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Politics and drama in the wake of COVID.

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Comment from lancellot
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Hmm, it may be better to separate the three events into their own chapters. Also, you need to edit the paragraphs and line spacings back into this. (Assuming they were originally there.) It makes reading and following the stories easier.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024

Comment from Gunner Lil
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This reader wants more. Love mystery and crime stories. Will be looking for chapter one.
I would only change machine gun to automatic weapons fire.
Easy read and moves along fast.
Thank you!

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
    Thank you. I'll correct that.