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Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Valentine's Day is Not For All".
13 total reviews
Comment from Mark Schardine
A person experiencing genuine sorrow suffers as much from the toxic positivity of others than anything else. A none too serious show of staged happiness only reminds them of the harm done.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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A person experiencing genuine sorrow suffers as much from the toxic positivity of others than anything else. A none too serious show of staged happiness only reminds them of the harm done.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Mark, I am happy you like it. A little humor for change.
I appreciate the exceptional six stars review and kind words.
gypsy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Everybody does not celebrate Valentine's Day. It is just another day to some but for the ones who believe in making Valentine's Day special is a work of a happy heart.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Everybody does not celebrate Valentine's Day. It is just another day to some but for the ones who believe in making Valentine's Day special is a work of a happy heart.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Valentine's Day sucks for me! I am divorcing my husband who was the love of my life. I will not be sent flowers or candy. If cupid comes near me, I will kick him to the curb. You poem said it all. Nicely written. Good pictures too. Karen
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Valentine's Day sucks for me! I am divorcing my husband who was the love of my life. I will not be sent flowers or candy. If cupid comes near me, I will kick him to the curb. You poem said it all. Nicely written. Good pictures too. Karen
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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I hear you. I'm divorced too and I really thought he was the one. Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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This will perk you up. What do you call a clairvoyant midget who is on the run from the law?
A small medium at large! :-)
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Hahaha... love it
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:-)
Comment from jim vecchio
I'm still in love, but my love's not here anymore. Oh, Gypsy, won't you be my Valentine? Please let me know soon, or I'll have to ask Shelley Kate!! Only kidding! As usual, your words and presentation are beyond criticism and leave us wanting more!
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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I'm still in love, but my love's not here anymore. Oh, Gypsy, won't you be my Valentine? Please let me know soon, or I'll have to ask Shelley Kate!! Only kidding! As usual, your words and presentation are beyond criticism and leave us wanting more!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Shelley Kay is awesome but if she is not avaliable let me know. LoL
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Only kidding! I want to enjoy all the words both of you write, and don't want to start a rivalry.
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Hehe... yeah I know
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Anyhow, you and your loved ones have a very happy and blessed Valentine's Day!
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You too, Jim, have a great one. I know your wife still lives in your heart.
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Always! God Bless!
Comment from mermaids
I applaud you for creating a Valentine's Day poem that is sad, because it is a sad day for many. I feel it should be a day that celebrates all kinds of love. Excellent use of words that captures sad feelings, a broken heart and longing for love.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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I applaud you for creating a Valentine's Day poem that is sad, because it is a sad day for many. I feel it should be a day that celebrates all kinds of love. Excellent use of words that captures sad feelings, a broken heart and longing for love.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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I agree with you, love should be celebrated every day and some people who have lost their loved one may be sad.
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sugarray77
I have always thought that Valentine's Day should be private and celebrated between just the two ~ but the commercialism has made it gaudy. I understand your point and feel remorse for those who are saddened at this time. Great and introspective write, Gypsy.
Melissa
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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I have always thought that Valentine's Day should be private and celebrated between just the two ~ but the commercialism has made it gaudy. I understand your point and feel remorse for those who are saddened at this time. Great and introspective write, Gypsy.
Melissa
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from estory
This one stanza jumped out at me: "How many blue dusks witness a river of teardrops tangled with disillusion." That was poetry. The rhythm was wafting, ephemeral, the images were dark and tangled, mysterious and yet something we have all experienced. This is a poem for all those who have watched lovers on Valentine's Day for years without feeling the joy themselves. It's like looking at a window full of toys you will never get on Christmas. Lots of emotion packed in here. estory
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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This one stanza jumped out at me: "How many blue dusks witness a river of teardrops tangled with disillusion." That was poetry. The rhythm was wafting, ephemeral, the images were dark and tangled, mysterious and yet something we have all experienced. This is a poem for all those who have watched lovers on Valentine's Day for years without feeling the joy themselves. It's like looking at a window full of toys you will never get on Christmas. Lots of emotion packed in here. estory
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem. You understand what I mean in this poem, thank you.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Unconditional love is celebrated every day. Some just haven't discovered that type of love, yet. Your poem is very well written and describes heart ache that many people know. I can see why Valentines Day would be heard for those people. We should be aware of them in our circle and reach out to them.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Unconditional love is celebrated every day. Some just haven't discovered that type of love, yet. Your poem is very well written and describes heart ache that many people know. I can see why Valentines Day would be heard for those people. We should be aware of them in our circle and reach out to them.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
I'm not a huge fan of Valentines day. My husband used to buy my roses and chocolates. I finally told him a bouquet of flowers just out of the blue on a random Tuesday would mean so much more. Now we go to lunch or dinner and have a nice meal. Heart break sucks. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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I'm not a huge fan of Valentines day. My husband used to buy my roses and chocolates. I finally told him a bouquet of flowers just out of the blue on a random Tuesday would mean so much more. Now we go to lunch or dinner and have a nice meal. Heart break sucks. Gretchen
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
I like this very much and I enjoyed listening to it. I could not read it because of the contrast with the text in the background but that being said it still is a good piece of work and I enjoyed it. I wish you the very best weekend. Patricia.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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I like this very much and I enjoyed listening to it. I could not read it because of the contrast with the text in the background but that being said it still is a good piece of work and I enjoyed it. I wish you the very best weekend. Patricia.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
